I still don't understand why the rooms need to be so large - ala those japanese hotels.
I think a straight up section showing how these dream portals work - hey have you looked at "dream catchers" by the way?
also, I still have no understanding of how people move through the building.
I think you "creative side of the building needs a lot of work - first of all it should not be confined to the BOUNDRIES of the existing envelope - it should project out into space - consider making the "new addition" dwarf (in terms of size/scale) the boring half (aspirational)
These diagrams are DOPE!!
ReplyDeleteChristine, these are seriously awesome! Very clear and easily understandable. Nice!!
ReplyDeleteI still don't understand why the rooms need to be so large - ala those japanese hotels.
ReplyDeleteI think a straight up section showing how these dream portals work - hey have you looked at "dream catchers" by the way?
also, I still have no understanding of how people move through the building.
I think you "creative side of the building needs a lot of work - first of all it should not be confined to the BOUNDRIES of the existing envelope - it should project out into space - consider making the "new addition" dwarf (in terms of size/scale) the boring half (aspirational)
but I think too much time is being spent on sketch - up.
ReplyDeletethese diagrams can be produced much quicker using trace and such.
also I think graphically these need to be looked at - think about ideas of FIGURE/GROUND you are too "figure" heavy in the first two diagrams.
the third diagram is better - but I think a single sectional drawing should do the trick - be efficient.